I've had Artificial Angel [link]
(My 100% original story) sitting around for a while mostly because I don't know what I want to do with it. At first I wanted to get it publish but that's crazy so now it's just sitting there on my PC gathering dust.
I re-read the prologue again recently and knew it could use some improvement so that's what I did. I rewrote the entire prologue from scratch and I believe it's much better now.
Enjoy and please let me know what you think.